Michael LaReaux sent an update for A Place to Run Free

Thank you to everyone who has chosen to follow A Place to Run Free. I’m stunned that seven people have decided to follow this story so far. I’ve added a second chapter, in which Jake finds himself pulled from the water into a very different world than the one he left.

I was fully prepared to be discouraged when no one paid the slightest attention to Jake’s journey through Belindanatha (The Place Where We Run Free in the language-if you can even call it that-of the pets who have gone ahead of us to the other side). Knowing that even one person is interested enough to follow the story means a lot to me. Thank you again. I’ll work hard to bring Jake’s story to (after)life.


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    Michael LaReaux commented on Space Tripping
    Nice concept! I think there’s tremendous opportunity just in this first section for even more laughs. I’d love to see more about exactly how he landed the ship, and more about how the denizens of the city reacted to him crawling out of the hole. There’s also a world of opportunity for hysterical dialog between Jopp and Chuck when the trucker first climbs into the cab and finds a slobbering drunk vagrant who speaks fluent Joppian instead of English. I  Imagine them both saying roughly the same things in different languages and neither understanding the other. This novel has a lot of great potential, and I look forward to seeing more of it as it goes along.

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      Michael LaReaux commented on Space Tripping
      Nice concept! I think there’s tremendous opportunity just in this first section for even more laughs. I’d love to see more about exactly how he landed the ship, and more about how the denizens of the city reacted to him crawling out of the hole. There’s also a world of opportunity for hysterical dialog between Jopp and Chuck when the trucker first climbs into the cab and finds a slobbering drunk vagrant who speaks fluent Joppian instead of English. I  Imagine them both saying roughly the same things in different languages and neither understanding the other. This novel has a lot of great potential, and I look forward to seeing more of it as it goes along.

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        "These are My Friends on Politics" is. both timeless and intensely relevant. The art takes center stage and really makes the concept work. As a political junkie, I see this type of behavior all the time. I recommend this book wholeheartedly.
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        Michael LaReaux sent an update for Globe

        Three followers and an actual order! Thanks to my legions of followers. (Hey, if Walt Whitman was a universe who contained multitudes, then my three followers can each be a separate legion.) 

        I just put up Chapter Three, but I think it might have ended up being tacked on to the end of Chapter Two. Which is where it will end up anyway, so it’s actually rather convenient. I’m supposed to say "Things are progressing very well", but that would probably be an exaggeration. On the plus side, there’s an entire finished manuscript,  so Globe isn’t technically vaporware. It’s just that the novel itself is lacking in anything that could be favorably compared to a workable plot. There’s also the tiny, miniscule problem of characters behaving badly without anyone knowing their motivations for doing so. But those are things that can be improved with a little revision.

        That’s where the magic happens, or so I’m told.

        Thanks for having a look at Globe!


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