J. S. Chlapowski highlighted an excerpt from The Adventures of MONOMAN

His transformation was complete.

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J. S. Chlapowski commented on an excerpt of The Gods That Keep Them

Show, don’t tell.

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J. S. Chlapowski commented on an excerpt of The Gods That Keep Them

Good work with accents. Not all authors can do that well (see King, Stephen).

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"Why, I’m the fuckin’ one ta save this shithole, lass. Now, do us a favor and piss off, if ye don’t mind,"

J. S. Chlapowski commented on an excerpt of The Gods That Keep Them

Great opening sentence. I’d cut out ’horribly’. Let the reader supply her own adverbs.

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The horribly disfigured features of the hill giant’s face were contorted with agony as his head sailed through the air, trailing blood and bits of gore like the tail of a comet.