L.V. commented on an excerpt of Seeking the Elephant
I really like this opening, although I would remove the second "and", "and mountain roads, a variety of stars" Makes the sentence flow a little bit better.
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    A thick canopy covered much of the remote rural and mountain roads and a variety of stars peeked down from a dark sky, salting the trees overhead.
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    The mystery of the lore itself will pull you in.
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    Hey guys, I’m just simply asking for recommendations, get the word out more than what it is. My brain is exhausted and my brain is running out of glucose. Headaches are setting in and the emotional turmoil is turning me into a dinosaur. 

    So if you could bring a T-rex’s dreams come to life, that would really help me out. As always I’ll try and pay back the favor as long as I have time I’m running desperately short on the stuff.
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      So. The Vatheran Saga is no longer a 5 book epic, it will be a trilogy moving forward. I think a trilogy is more compact than a 5 book series and more accessible.

      I also changed the genre back to Fantasy. While it has science-fiction in it--it’s definitely in the vein of fantasy.
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