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I laughed. I cried. I threw up in my mouth a little bit.It fulfills, in my opinion, the basic definition of the word "obscene," but for the fact that it possesses artistic value. The characters have a certain deranged charm about them, the subversion (perversion?) of the superhero origin story is refreshing, and there are several relatable observations on the human condition that I was not expecting from an excerpt containing so many bodily fluids and references to, pardon my French, toaster fucking.Although: there are way too many adverbs in this draft. The road to Hell is paved with adverbs.
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    Hi folks, thanks for your support to date :) 

    I’ve been looking through the Terms of Service for Inkshares and I’m worried my book could be considered obscene due to the comments of some of my friends. Would anyone be able to give me a second opinion based on the two chapters that I’ve posted here? I don’t think it’s too bad myself, but I’d hate to start doing well on here then find out I’m unpublishable! 

    If there’s anything I can do in return (reviewing your work springs to mind) then I’ll be happy to repay the favour.

    Cheers,

    Glenn

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      Project Ferrum Arafa, the Iron Giant, is underway in our first draft of the prologue for Spaceship Mars. This prologue sets the tone and direction of the story while giving the reader a glimpse of our future. Be sure to follow along and find out what happens to Sofiya and the Iron Giant in Spaceship Mars.

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        Much later than intended with this Sunday’s reviews/recommendations (I will neither confirm or deny that this was due to a series of unplanned naps as I sat in my way too comfy chair at this desk or as I prefer to call them “nap ambushes”), which I suppose would technically be Monday reviews/recommendations at this point. I’m sticking with the same format as last week with this one (1 book from my old short list, 1 underdog space opera not currently in the top 10, and 1 space opera currently in the top 10), so I’ll just jump right into it. As always, links are embedded in the bold text.



        “Infinity Mind”  by   Patrick Jamison: Oppressive government? Mars colony? Telepathic assassin? Yes to all three, and the first 2 chapters presented here make me happy to have answered so. The first chapter serves as an excellent pressure cooker, serving to quickly introduce and humanize Mason through his extreme pain, both physical and emotional, during an ordeal which also serves as the hook to draw us into the main plot on hand. Chapter 2 pulls back from Mason to give us a real look at the larger world, or in this instance colony. What we are shown is a significant glimpse into a fully developed world, populated by real people and with a well laid out political structure. I am confident in the promise this glimpse makes, and am eager to continue reading about the El Dorado colony as well as the ordeals and intrigue which both it and Mason are most certainly barreling towards.



        “The Inhabitants: An Unremembered Life”  by  Michael Sebby: Filled with excellent characterization, Mr. Sebby also does a wonderful job of juxtaposing the familiar waking world with the sometimes surreal, sometimes sinister, and often prophetic dreams of the main character, Jacob. Throughout the first 4 chapters presented here we are left to ponder the reality of the dreams as well as the waking world they so often intersect. Are they truly prophetic? Just what are the people/creatures encountered in some of the more unusual dreams? I look forward to reading more and finding out just what is real, unreal, and more importantly where this is all taking Jacob.



        “The Lonely Space Lounge”  by  Gregory Wlasiuk and Venkat Malladi: Told in a series of transmissions from different crew members on the same ship, the narrative proceeds in a non-standard format which I immediately fell in love with. Assigned to the Healthy Beverage Division in the Cosmic Empire, the crew certainly has their individual quirks as they work alongside each other aboard what is best described as a brewery ship. The portions presented here show a wealth of wit, unique voices to each character, and just enough detail to give one the sense that something is not quite right. Delving deeper into that mystery alongside this cast of well-written, unique characters promises to be very much a joy.

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          I feel at this point that I will have to admit defeat. 
          Yeah, there are a few people I can think of who will probably still pre-order, but honestly, nowhere near the 185 more needed, just to make quill. 
          For everyone who has already pre-ordered you will obviously get your money back and this is not me giving up completely. 
          I shall regroup and have another think. 
          All the time that I am spending trying to promote "Children" is time I am not spending writing Women, or the fourth Time Tunnel book, or the biography of my Grandfather Frank Kingdon-Ward. 

          Love y’all

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