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The current excerpt of Lucky introduces three characters, the eponymous heroine, a surly space captain, and a waitress drudging her days away in a space colony cantina. The chapters give brief glimpses into who these three people are, and quickly establishes how they are interconnected. You get the sense that these are real people in a potential romance novel, with real emotions and problems that just happen to occur in space...
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    When getting a notification that there's a new chapter to a book you follow brightens your entire day, you know you've got a great story on your hands. Lucky does just that. With a helluva beginning that leaves you begging for more, you quickly find yourself meeting a great cast of characters who you're just dying to know fully so you can get to writing that fan-fic already. Lucky's the kind of story that grips you and doesn't let go, but to be honest, you wouldn't want it to anyway.
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      When getting a notification that there's a new chapter to a book you follow brightens your entire day, you know you've got a great story on your hands. Lucky does just that. With a helluva beginning that leaves you begging for more, you quickly find yourself meeting a great cast of characters who you're just dying to know fully so you can get to writing that fan-fic already. Lucky's the kind of story that grips you and doesn't let go, but to be honest, you wouldn't want it to anyway.
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        (1) Felina

        Every night was the same at the cantina: work, deal with drunken patrons, ignore the pain in her legs, go home. The day-in, day-out boredom was not something Felina had imagined when she left home, but between the indentured servitude she owed Rosa and the alternative, she guessed she really had it okay.

        Tonight, however, promised to be different. Felina had received a call that morning from her brother and at any moment expected him to walk through the doo. . .

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          (1) Felina

          Every night was the same at the cantina: work, deal with drunken patrons, ignore the pain in her legs, go home. The day-in, day-out boredom was not something Felina had imagined when she left home, but between the indentured servitude she owed Rosa and the alternative, she guessed she really had it okay.

          Tonight, however, promised to be different. Felina had received a call that morning from her brother and at any moment expected him to walk through the doo. . .

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            The writing in this opening is so precise and also so lyrical, surprisingly beautiful for a beginning that details child abuse. Skillful and intriguing--one to watch if you love good prose combined with good story telling.

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              “Yeah! A house that looks just like our house, but a little different. With a mom just like your mom, but different.”
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              “Yeah! A house that looks just like our house, but a little different. With a mom just like your mom, but different.”
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              Most people probably didn’t grow up having visited a parallel universe. Nathan Sanchez did.

              He wouldn’t have called it that at the time, but that’s what it was.

              His dad had taken him along on a trip to pick up dinner at Sonic Burger. It was hard to find those back then. Impossible now, obviously. Nathan couldn’t remember what was special about their food, but had a vague notion that they had good milkshakes.

              But that’s not important. After the. . .

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                Most people probably didn’t grow up having visited a parallel universe. Nathan Sanchez did.

                He wouldn’t have called it that at the time, but that’s what it was.

                His dad had taken him along on a trip to pick up dinner at Sonic Burger. It was hard to find those back then. Impossible now, obviously. Nathan couldn’t remember what was special about their food, but had a vague notion that they had good milkshakes.

                But that’s not important. After the. . .

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