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Stanley Anderson commented on The Day That Didn’t Want To Be
Now that the couple has been "woken from their delusion", this scene felt like they were sobering up to what’s really going on. That, even though the mystery surrounding their situation allured them to begin with, they might actually be in danger. Everyone on the planet. 
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    Stanley Anderson commented on The Day That Didn’t Want To Be
    When I wrote the scenes with the little runaway boy, I mainly wrote them because I wanted to reveal the object that was the cause of everything, even though it seems to remain a mystery as to how it has caused everything.
    But as I kept writing the scenes with the runaway boy, they gave me the room I needed for an internal debate to play itself out in the boy’s imagination as he’s trying to figure out what the wrench is. He asks new questions and some of the same questions with each new characteristic revealed by the object.
    It’s also a glimpse into how the one who is being hunted had stumbled into messing everything up. Pure human curiosity into the unknown. Hopefully, these scenes will not only be funny and entertaining, but help readers understand why the guy who is being hunted did what he did.
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      Stanley Anderson commented on The Day That Didn’t Want To Be
      This whole scene was a time for the characters to forget everything and just enjoy themselves....although, the inevitable was always at the back of their minds. While the world sleeps, these characters borrow it for a time, carefree, unfettered, living in a make-believe moment that they fool themselves with....just to get themselves ready for the confrontation. 
      The two couples basically have their own private honeymoons without having to adhere to societal norms or rules. 
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        Stanley Anderson commented on The Day That Didn’t Want To Be
        Now that the seriousness of the situation has been touched upon, what does the guilty party do before meeting his fate? Why, discuss intimacy with his lover, of course!
        On the other hand, the one trying to pacify the situation exposes a little more of his intentions....but are they applauded? 
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          Stanley Anderson commented on The Day That Didn’t Want To Be
          I thought this was one of the most interesting parts of this story. The point where all the so-called freedoms start to look different. Where the characters find out they aren’t free. Where their position in all this might be important, and that importance is scary. 
          I also thought this scene personified the "quietness" that is the theme of this story. 
          Yet, there comes something that shakes everything. A sign! Now, the rest of the story will unfold into the truth.
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            Stanley Anderson commented on The Day That Didn’t Want To Be
            After a big action scene, it’s time to drop back into mystery....specifically, about the wrench. The little boy really has no idea what he’s messing with, and he happens to get another visit, but from someone else even more mysterious. Just what is that mirror for, anyway? Or does it have many purposes?
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