@Luke Fellner You’re welcome! ...but, when you say "Last time I checked my book didn’t even show up when I looked it up word for word, the only place I could find it on was Google. " ....that sounds like something is definitely messed up.
Actually, I tried it just now and it came up first (out of three total books titled "The Burned" - well, one’s called "The Burned Violet"). Seems to be working all right. I was about to add Thad on this if there was a problem with the code, but it looks functional! If you ever do run into troubles like that where you’re sure the website’s not working, send Hello[at]inkshares an email.
I’d like to thank you all for following me. Special thanks to all who have given feedback so far, and very special thanks to @Pontus Karsten for the review. Check out his book "The Orb of Rahnos"
I read through everything you have posted and I have to say that I'm intrigued. I normally don't like western stories but when written in first-person it really works well. I am looking forward to reading more of it but I would like to leave you with some constructive critique as well. One thing I would like to see is descriptions of tone and facial expressions.
I read through everything you have posted and I have to say that I'm intrigued. I normally don't like western stories but when written in first-person it really works well. I am looking forward to reading more of it but I would like to leave you with some constructive critique as well. One thing I would like to see is descriptions of tone and facial expressions.
I’ve decided to cut parts of the story I was going to write, they would be very long and boring compared to the high levels of action and bizarre violence use throughout the story. These parts can also be summed up in a paragraph so why bother stretching an unimportant section longer than needed? This leaves me with just four chapters left to write.