I love this character. Your use of idiosyncratic dialogue in crafting fantasy characters is so organic and believable. It’s critically important in making good fantasy, and you do it SO well. As a reader, I really appreciate that.
“Have you seen my manners? I usually bring them when new visitors come but I don’t know where they are now. It has been a very long time since we’ve had anyone new. I think.”
Your use of the real-world concept of echolocation, combined with the fantasy Dreamsight, really brings this action sequence in total darkness to life.
