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“That is not how the rules of this game work. She will be returned to her human form, provided you bring me what I have asked for. But for each cycle of the moon that passes without the delivery of the Star-born the rose will begin to wither. Take too long and she will die. It is your choice how long she suffers.”
Careful now. We wouldn’t want to damage any of her petals…
Another part I’m reworking. thank you for the fresh set of eyes on this!
His sister had disappeared.
Good point, I’ve noted it for adjustment. :)
I will certainly look into reworking this bit.
