alright, this is not a demand, but it is highly recommended to change this.
Not because of bad spelling or because of bad grammar, but because of bad background. All dwarves, no matter how nice, are ALWAYS bad drunks. Literally they will be rude. They will be roudy, and they will CONSTANTLY try to sound more pissed off then they actually are. Id suggest saying instead of "Never been spoken to as rudely by a customer" Say something like "a surprisingly nasty rebuke." or something along those regards. Also what she says would probably have gotten her punched in the mouth. Dwarves, good and not so good, will hold their honor on their sleeves. Even if a woman insults them, they will fight them.
just something ive seen in Dwarven lore.
Merryander had huffed and spun on her heels at such a rebuke, having never been spoken to as rudely by a customer. "I wonder what’s up that one’s arse," she muttered while storming off.
