Henry Morgan, the Gofer of an Elder God named Mr. Smith is asked to look into a sudden illness plaguing several child in Manhattan. While trying to sort this mess out Henry uncovers a plot that could erase the world as he know it.
An aging cop must journey inside the fractured mind of a killer in order to find a missing girl and put an end to a growing body count. No one is safe and things may not be as they appear in this dark tale of murder, mystery, and betrayal.
I know you have your list of things you want feedback on but I think everything is fine and beyond expectations if anything. I’d just say careful using comments like "It is larger than just a fantasy novel, it is an examination of the human condition, of the big questions in life." Because that’s what every writer does!!! It sounds funny to have a writer repeat it back to another writer as if we don’t understand... Which particular themes is fine to point out though ;)
