@Shawn Dove Well said, those are some great examples for anyone still struggling with this issue. Another good tip is to put yourself into the characters shoes. Think, "What would they be doing? Are they hiding from the crowd or adoring it? Is this person easily distracted? What stands out to this character?" Then use that information to find the most fitting action.
An authoritarian world that's not too difficult to imagine. The writing is clear and strong. The first chapter slowly orients you to the fact that privacy and freedom have been sacrificed to big brother.
Sixty years after The Seclusion, in which America sealed itself off from the outside world, Patch Collins navigates the panoptic nightmare of a total surveillance state.
Sixty years after The Seclusion, in which America sealed itself off from the outside world, Patch Collins navigates the panoptic nightmare of a total surveillance state.
