Up until this point I had the Grey maiden standing with her back to the broken window. This was purely an assumption. Perhaps include some orientation at an earlier point. For instance, if the description of the hair and the establishment of her identity by the patrons was based on only being able to see her from behind....... This would set her clearly with back to the drinkers facing the window. However, this would also necessarily prevent any description of the scar and the gorgeous eyes........Hmmm tricky.