Antimony Noon commented on an excerpt of Fae Child
I’m really enjoying the way you’ve written Abbie - she is believably childlike, and this especially is wonderful small child logic! 
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    The sun was well overhead, which meant it was lunch time.
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    This is lovely and immediately makes me think of faerie stories! 
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      if you called a forest by any other name it lost some of it’s inherent magic
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      A child slips through a portal into the land of the Fae and traverses the Otherworld with the help of a young elf, while her parents are left to deal with the changeling that was left in her place.
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      The newest chapter of Spectrum, Guardian is up and ready to read! 
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        @Antimony Noon Thanks a lot for your feedback! It was very useful, and I’m glad you enjoyed the chapters. I dont normally think about thing like that when you said that the word sounded "cold" compared to the rest of the piece’s tone. Very helpful when many people show their own perspectives  
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          Thank you.. Have moved the "Run" to the next gap, and I agree it works better. :)
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