"That’s not irony Alyx, that’s-" Mae sighed, interrupted as a finger from Ruth shot in front of her mouth.
"That’s not irony Alyx, that’s-" Mae sighed, interrupted as a finger from Ruth shot in front of her mouth.
"Copulating," Mae added. Crumbs of pastry fell down her jumper.
"Copulating," Mae added. Crumbs of pastry fell down her jumper.
Typo - should be shepherd’s pie.
I’d consider dropping this comma to improve the flow of the sentence.
The sentences in this paragraph feel a bit broken - I’d suggest giving the paragraph a re-write to make sure each of the sentences is complete and that it isn’t too difficult for the reader to follow.
The sentences in this paragraph feel a bit broken - I’d suggest giving the paragraph a re-write to make sure each of the sentences is complete and that it isn’t too difficult for the reader to follow.
