I get a faintly "Anonymous" vibe from this, which is lots of fun. V for Vendetta meets Homer. I'm totally good with this combination.
Minor editorial note: end of the first stanza, it should probably be either "Take up your mantle and witness the truth" or, "Take up your mantle and bear witness TO the truth." whichever sense you were going for. End of the second stanza, Bringing should be capitalized, even though it's the only enjambed line in the entire manifesto. Capitalization preserves the poetic feel of the entire piece.
Loving this. Really looking forward to what comes next.
I get a faintly "Anonymous" vibe from this, which is lots of fun. V for Vendetta meets Homer. I'm totally good with this combination.
Minor editorial note: end of the first stanza, it should probably be either "Take up your mantle and witness the truth" or, "Take up your mantle and bear witness TO the truth." whichever sense you were going for. End of the second stanza, Bringing should be capitalized, even though it's the only enjambed line in the entire manifesto. Capitalization preserves the poetic feel of the entire piece.
Loving this. Really looking forward to what comes next.