Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of Sync City
Tony V. beat me to the punch on this one... but I'd like to highlight the whole damn paragraph as being absolutely stellar writing. Besides having an engaging story (and this character's voice, man!), you've also got some helluva philosophy working in under it all.
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    'Man is not God.' 'Leave nature to nature.' The God-botherers and the greenies were hand-in-hand over this one. Their protests against science and the unknown outcomes of people tampering with the environment had fallen on deaf ears. Progress was king and humanity had the keys to the castle
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    Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of Sync City
    Man, I am really digging your writing style. Short, punchy sentences. Everything just... MOVES. I need to be taking notes! I tend to get over-winded... like this comment for instance. Just wrap the sh*t up and move on, Joe!
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      They hadn't been trained for the events to follow. I know. Back then I was a cop, too.
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      Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of Sync City
      I'm not sure if the humor is intentional, but I'm laughing like crazy right now. Hahahaha! Such a good opener!
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