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He lights up the broad-screen monitor on the wall in front of him and riffles through the lab scenes like a pack of cards. From somewhere deep below us a muffled musical sound, a series of rumbling chords, accompanies the visual display.
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Overall, I felt the pacing was perhaps too expository. While, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it, I felt that perhaps some of the details could have been realized through character action or interaction BUT it's only the Prologue and what it does is fully setup up the world. Great work.
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    While this is engaging, I thought, "Who died? until I read on.
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