Thomas J. Arnold commented on And the Wolf Shall Dwell
Yeah, it may not work as well with the shorter chapters.  Though it may.  Ultimately when it comes to design/layout I'm probably not the best one to be trying to give advice.  I'd just suggest trying it for a few chapters and if you end up not liking it or feel it is more of an impediment than a benefit then it would be easy enough to just take out the headings then.

As for the fear of losing readers in the first few pages, I can understand that.  My opening is a bit more exposition heavy than I would like, but every time I try to change it I end up being forced back to the conclusion that its necessary in order to make sure readers actually understand why things transpire the way they do in the rest of my Part 1.
 
Have you joined the group we have on the Goodreads forum yet?  If not you should, because there's no shortage of people there who could give you better advice than I can.
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    Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for Seven Shards: The Colors of Wine

    Thanks again to everyone for your continued support! You're amazing, inspiring, and just plain awesome. It's been a pretty crazy week, but I have to say that having the Quill mark behind me has lifted quite a heavy load of stress off my shoulders. And as a result, my creativity is flowing like a river once again!

    One of the things I've been toiling with these past few days is a new cover design. At some point I'll need to re-do the cover (with the appropriate font and image rights), so I figured I might as well get a head start now. Here's where I'm at so far:

    My plan is to create some sort of symbol or simple illustration in the center. But before I get into that, does anyone have any input to share? Do you like the font and spacing? Have an idea for the symbol/illustration? Do you miss the triangles? Let me know!


    Cheers and have a great week!

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      The 4th Raffle has arrived!

      Here's the video for you to see if you've won:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yYFe_mZ4MFQ

      Congrats to the winner! The next drawing will happen when I reach 80 readers.

      Wow, that was brief.

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        Thomas J. Arnold liked an update for Blood Dawn

        Today I want to announce something exciting for Blood Dawn!

        I'm finally on Johnslist, thanks to Craig Monroe, author of The Bones of the Past and a winner of the recent Sword & Laser Contest 2.

        So ... what's Johnslist?

        Nothing at all like Craiglist, I promise. Johnslist is one of many ideas the Inkshares author community on Goodreads has come up with to help work together and promote other Inkshares books. The idea behind it is simple: one of the community members creates a thread encouraging other members to help a certain project get funded. An author cannot create a thread for themselves, because otherwise that's self-promotion. It has to genuinely be other members of the community. I was the first author to do this for Andrew Wood's great epic fantasy book, Storm of Fury, but then the trend continued, which is why the authors named it after me.

        If you'd like to help Blood Dawn get fully funded, then you can join the efforts. First and most important, if you haven't bought the book yet, then let's rectifying that right now -- click here to order an ebook or print book of Blood Dawn.

        All right, so for those who have ordered and really want to help get this book into bookstores everywhere, you can now join the team effort. Just follow this link to the thread:

        https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/17978018-let-s-get-blood-dawn-fully-funded

        If you're an author and you haven't heard of the Inkshares promotion group, then be sure to join up because you're missing out on an amazing wealth of knowledge on how to succeed with crowdfunding a book. Even if you're not an author, feel free to join our group if you are a passionate reader and would like to help or share ideas. The community is open to all. Plus, we'd all love to hear from some readers on exactly what interests them or turns them off when it comes to choosing new book projects to back.

        The final 3 months is here, so lets work together and make this happen!

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          Good morning readers!

          Things have been busy behind the scenes here at DHM central.  I spent the weekend writing out the synopsis for the plot, finding out about some very cool things that will happen in the story and getting surprised by my characters along the way as I always do.  

          My goal for this week is to finish writing chapter two and to get that up on the Inkshares page. I'm probably not going to be posting the entire manuscript up here (I want you all to have motivation to read your copies when you get them), but I do think it's important to get to Dax and his crew so you know what the flavor of this world will taste like. 

          We are four orders away from our next raffle.  From my calculations, we have about 30 people who are following the book who haven't ordered yet, so I'm hoping that getting a chance to read chapter two and the prospect of winning a second book will be enough to tip you over into preorder land.

          For other Inkshares writers, I have some credits available to trade.  Just DM me on Twitter @amandaorneck with a referral link to your book and I'll order using it so you can get some credits back for you to use on DHM. 

          I'm hoping to get my book to Quill at least by the end of February. We managed to get halfway in one month, so I think it's possible, don't you?  
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            Now that the Sword and Laser Contest is over, I've done what any person would do without a lick of sense when it comes to marketing: updated my book's cover and provided more information about it in the form of a synopsis.

            Would it have helped generate more interest in Transilience during the contest? Maybe. I dunno. The past is the past. Insert more platitudes.

            What matters most is that the earnest belief these additions will generate interest and enthusiasm about Transilience for the remainder of its funding campaign. I need to convince a whole lot of people to part with their money in the next 49 days. Money well spent. That much is certain. Nonetheless, this is the powerball and therefore requires a tad more persuading.

            Here is the cover in a much larger format.

            Okay...that was really big! I can't seem to resize the image either. Are you still here???

            Good!

            The blurb in the top righthand corner may seem out of place when compared to what else you may have read with regards to Transilience. Rest assured, it fits perfectly. The idea of legacies forms the central theme of the novel. It is what ties the two cases together and ultimately allows the reader to assess the values and morals of the characters, and perhaps even the world in which we inhabit.

            One final thing before I sign off.

            I would like to thank my buddies, Mike and He-who-shall-not-be-named, for the generosity in supporting Transilience. I have known these guys for a very long time and shared in some pretty astounding adventures in real life and fictive/virtual world. Simply uttering the word "Shar" will bring back a flood of memories about a D&D session that was simultaneously some of the worst story-telling I ever subjected anyone to, and the most memorable. And it was in the unforgiving jungles of Chult with Mike that I experienced my one and only TPK. I am very happy and proud to have your names listed in Transilience.

            Cheers!

            Kevin

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              Thomas J. Arnold commented on Tumulynth
              I actually like both chapter styles - short and long.  It just depends on the overall feel that you're going for in the story which works better.
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                I added another chunk to chapter 1. The Howl of Winter. Do you prefer shorter chapter, with a quick pace, or longer chapters, with more details? :)

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