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A fantasy author from Malaysia. I write because my imagination needs a place to breathe.
This is a great ending line for the chapter. :)
“I’ll do it. I may fail, but I have to make an effort to get my life back.”
This is a little confusing. For a second, I wasn’t sure Lauren was speaking until after the second sentence... and... also, I wasn’t sure why she said "stop." Are the scissors really causing that much discomfort? I think some more detail might be needed here.
Hmm. Alyssa? Seems kind of... normal. The other names seem to have an otherworldly quality (Aithne, Karita), but Alyssa just sounds... out of place.
