“No, my son. I’m sorry, but… You’ll be sent to the other side of the city for a while to train under a man named Darius Black.
That is what we call cheating, Rose. LOL
She gasped and looked over at him. Shock swept over her face as she watched him, smirking at her, “No way! You found it already? But how?” she asked curiously.
This is a good line for the story. I mean, it does kind of make us wonder why the bells are ringing, but you might have to do better than that to hook in readers.
Bells rang out high above the city, Redwood, in the kingdom of Yalelia.
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Heidi Rebstock is a Pug-loving, marshmallow-eating Christian nerd with a dream to write and publish ...
Heidi Rebstock is a Pug-loving, marshmallow-eating Christian nerd with a dream to write and publish ...
