Witherfist is a really interesting and engaging piece! Love your knack for creating immersive worlds. I wonder if you can spare a sec or two...If you’d check out my project Dawn of the Raven Goddess? Thanks and good luck! :)
@J. Graham-JonesIf you need an example of thoughts check out my sample. I know mine’s different from yours in that it’s in first person, but it might be able to help with thinking of how a character would think.
