Piper Flint sent an update for Finding the Princess

Hey guys,

I feel like I haven't updated in a while. I know I haven't put up a new chapter in a while. I added three short chapters today. I added up until the last character really gets introduced into the story. You will have already met him if you read the chapter that I didn't send out. I did send out a chapter that gives you a little glimpse into everyone's powers and showing a bit of what they can do. You should know all of the characters now.

I also changed the title as you can probably already tell. Although it should probably be called Protecting the Princess instead of Finding because the finding part was really easy and happens in like the first three chapters but I'm working on it. I'm also working on making a better blurb and full synopsis of the story since it is not the same as the first draft I wrote of this story.

The draft is completed as of right now so what you are reading are the only chapters I have right now, and I know that they probably need a lot of work but I can't always see my own mistakes. Please leave some comments on the chapters and tell me what you like, what needs more, and what is just unnecessary for the story.

Thank you!

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    Piper Flint sent an update for Isolation

    Hey guys,

    I just wanted to let you know that I have started completely rewriting this story. I have some people reading through my first draft and ripping it to shreds which is very helpful so that I know what I need to fix to make my story better. The chapters are still mostly going to be the same just with more detail of their surroundings and their emotions. Please read the introduction chapters that I have right now and let me know what you think so that I know where I need to improve the new chapters.  

    Thank you!

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