Scott Carss followed Leanne Phillips
Leanne Phillips
Enjoying supporting my son Robert Wren, author of Ophelia, Doll, and other Inkshares authors in thei...
Follow
Scott Carss followed Melanie Goodman
Melanie Goodman
Avid reader, gamer, lover of adventures, mom, and daydreamer extraordinaire.
Follow
Scott Carss followed Marty Lang
Marty Lang
Filmmaker. Journalist. Teacher. Pug lover. UConn basketball junkie. And Lindsay’s uncle.
Follow
Scott Carss followed Natalie
Natalie
An avid reader reading avidly
Follow
Scott Carss followed NiTrem
NiTrem
Books are saving lives.
Follow
Scott Carss followed Chris Gleason
Chris Gleason
full-time woodworker and author of woodworking books. I try to provide inspiration through great ph...
Follow
Scott Carss followed Franc Ingram
Franc Ingram
wannabe Engineer, Whovian, super fan of all things nerdy
Follow
Scott Carss commented on an excerpt of The Burned
Again this sounds a little redundant. Two sentences back to back using the exact same verb. Maybe say he finished examining it in under a minute or something else like that.
like

People who have liked this comment on a chapter of <i>The Burned</i>

    Scott Carss highlighted an excerpt from The Burned
    He happily looked at it. It barely took Jay a minute to look it over
    Read Chapter
    Scott Carss commented on an excerpt of The Burned
    This sounds a little redundant. Maybe you could finish with; "but they were awful close" or something else of that nature instead of directly repeating yourself.
    like

    People who have liked this comment on a chapter of <i>The Burned</i>

      More items