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The Cradle and the Sword
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Merlin Patrick O’Toole followed Beyond The Code
Beyond The Code
Join Aurora and her comrades in their struggle to topple the corrupt Hand Council and change their world as they know it
Merlin Patrick O’Toole recommended Wings of the Pirate
Post-WWII, Air Pirates, Race for the Treasure? Very interesting indeed!
Wings of the Pirate
A female Archaeologist and an expat Seaplane Pilot deal with Air Pirates while hunting treasure in the South Pacific after WWII.
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Don’t forget the letter "s" after the apostrophe. Wouldn’t want readers to see that as "Rasmu" and being more than one of the same person.
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    Rasmus’ stone features.
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    Good sentence, but my recommendation, put a comma after "yacht." Makes it easier for the readers to understand the sentence structure. Good work so far.
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      He gives a curt wave which is returned by the owner of the yacht and the seaplane moves within feet of the glossy wood hull of the sailing ship.
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      Merlin Patrick O’Toole commented on Thaumaturgic
      Resurrectors/Returners:

      A Tribe with the ability to revive the dead. They bring back those that are not ready to die, even from untimely death.  The Returners were one of the branches of doctors during the days of Nova Vega. But everything changed when a group of zealous fanatics protested against the idea of reviving the dead, whether old or young, viewing it to be the disruption of the cycle of life and death.

      By the year 2070, that Tribe was labelled heretics. A majority of its members were hunted down, arrested, and executed. Seven years later, the Nova Vegan Government decreed that the power to revive the dead be condemned as heresy, declaring that only God can bring back the dead and not man.
      The current whereabouts of the few that evaded the manhunt are unknown.
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