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Greetings Readers and Authors! Happy Memorial Day! May we remember those who have given us this opportunity!

Draftshares is going on this week! I’m uber excited to receive critique on both of the Lore of the Aos Sí drafts that are being featured during the event.  If you wouldn’t mind this week to find some time to give me some good old fashioned critique and spread the word about my drafts I would greatly appreciate it! I would be in your debt!

Furthermore! Here are some of the Drafts I plan on Critiquing and Following! Please take some time to peruse them too! After All There are Prizes! For More Information about Draftshares click here!

Please feel free to place both of these works under siege! Tear down the walls and Conquer the world of Tir na nÓg!

The Damnation of Man

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Electric Messiah

Here are the Drafts I am Following and Critiquing!

The Lion in the Darkness - by Christopher Johnson

Makhaira - by Amanda Orneck

The Edge of the World - by Connor Callaghan

Exile, Magus - by Thomas J. Arnold

Hiding Among the Stars - by Landon Trine

Make sure to support our community everyone! 

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