This is such a tease...I got sucked into the story and want to read more!

Since it won’t allow me to reply to your responses, I’ll post this here where you can hopefully find it. I want to thank all of you for the enthusiasm, follows, and reviews. I appreciate it more than you can possibly know. Sharing your writing with others can be very daunting, but the reactions I am receiving are making my heart soar.

Since it won’t allow me to reply to your responses, I’ll post this here where you can hopefully find it. I want to thank all of you for the enthusiasm, follows, and reviews. I appreciate it more than you can possibly know. Sharing your writing with others can be very daunting, but the reactions I am receiving are making my heart soar.

I really enjoyed these first two chapters.  It’s almost like you reached into the dreams that end with asking ourselves, "What the heck was that about?" and then trying and failing to go back to sleep to find out!  I can’t recall what the original context was for the suggestion to ’always leave them wanting more’, but you succeeded in that!
The one thing that I wondered about was in chapter two, did you mean his hair was revolting or did you mean reverting?  Curious because mine has experienced both...and worse.