CB Baker commented on an excerpt of JT Stevensen and the Agents of Vermillion.
Perhaps add sensory details, maybe the main character feels vibrations, and his ( class of water) by the side of his bed shakes. Is he scared? Excited? Confused?
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    Rumble, rumble! The living room jolted harder. Earthquake again? There was another rumbling, followed by a loud Boom!
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