Anthony Jones III sent an update for Detective Diaries

  Hey, readers.

  Welcome to our 10th Detective Sunday and the start of our pre-ordering campaign! It’s been about over 10 weeks since I started Inkshares, and by being here, I feel like I can accomplish my goals with the right connections and effort. So, I’d love it if you guys ordered or nudged a friend and told him/her about my book to see if they are interested. I could ramble on and on, but I’ll just say that my goal for now is reaching 250 orders. I wasn’t entirely sure about the amount of time I would need, but I decided that 90 days would do. I’ll continue to keep these updates coming and come up with new ways of perfecting the project. This project has a loooong road ahead of it, and I’ll just slowly make it better step by step. Oh, I almost forgot the mention that Chapter Four: Society (Edited Version) has been up for about some minutes, so check that out if you want to see the big changes in dialogue and information. Enjoy your evening or morning wherever you are, and remember to show support!

  Until next time, A.J.III.

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    Anthony Jones III sent an update for Detective Diaries

      Hey again, readers,

      Chapter Three: Theory (Edited Version) is now up and ready. This chapter follows close to the original in the beginning, but the other half deviates in terms of dialogue and characterization. Hopefully, you all enjoy. Next week will be the last edited version I will release.

      Until next time, A.J.III.
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      Anthony Jones III sent an update for Detective Diaries

        Hey readers,

        Welcome to our 9th Detective Sunday. I must say, we’ve come a long way with these Sunday updates, and the next will be the start of the pre-ordering stage. I have my mind set on starting off next Sunday, just after I release the next edited chapter. Speaking of edited chapters, Chapter Three: Theory (Edited Version) will be out later on today, and I will do a short update for that when I have everything finished for it. Now, I said I would do something particularly new for the book every Sunday, so this Sunday I will do small background touches on the main characters and potential side characters that I feel contributes tremendously to the plot.

        Main Characters:

        Amani Marshall: Daughter of Maxwell Marshall--The Owl, which is a nickname he gained from his clients such as the Detective Agency or Police Department when they wanted information on the latest underground developments in the city of Rochester. Amani is a talented 26-years-old bronze skinned young lady, who became an unranked officer at the age of 20. She moved up in the ranks over the years from stopping lethal criminals before they have even acted because she was always one step ahead of them. The year she was accused of being the Bone Breaker, she was a Chief Inspector--almost along the lines of being a Deputy Director over a deeper portion of officers than she already had. Now, Amani pursues the Bone Breaker in hopes of bringing him to justice after being imprisoned for three years. She has a year to clear her name as the Detective Agency watches over her activity closely.

        Carbine: Carbine is a 27-year-old detective who has been in his line of work for 6 years. In the past, Carbine was found as an orphan at the age of 15 and taken care of by his future partner, Flora Lamont at the age of 20. She became a mother figure to him and his education source for knowledge, for Carbine suffered from amnesia and needed proper training of basic things. At the time that Flora was 20, the Detective Agency had just been created and she was one of the first generation of detectives to lead against criminal activity. Carbine was inspired by her influence and the speeches she spoke in front of people in one of the many squares about the violence in Rochester. She became a symbol of justice, and a martyr at her death. Carbine now carries on her will to peace, no matter how silly it may seem. He wouldn’t allow himself to sit down and do nothing for the rest of his years.

        Lisa Elohim: Lisa is a 25-year-old woman who comes from a long line of nobles that had strong ties with Udon Heathcliff--king of Rochester 30 years back when it was a republic system, but now it is a democracy, and her family governs the system of trade in and out of the city. At a young age, Lisa was haunted by nightmares of death, but in reality, they were visions of those to die in the future. Even though she knew of the assassinations and unexpected illnesses against her family members, she couldn’t stop the inevitable. She spent her years in frantic slumbers or comas that lasted for weeks and even months as she witnessed deaths of those close to her. When of age, the only members of her family left was her younger brother and uncle. However, her uncle’s death came and her brother’s kidnapping shortly after by the hands of the Masked Monopoly--a group of aristocrats that specializes in assassinations against rival companies or bodies housing money. At that time, she vowed to find her brother and bring them to justice for murdering countless nobles. She employed by the Detective Agency at the age of 19 and has been searching since then. From the story perspective, she has stumbled upon a recent disappearance of Lucy Wright, a young noble girl who suddenly went missing a few days ago. She believes Masked Monopoly is behind it.

        Jerry Walker: Jerry is a 27-year-old man who originally lived on the country-side. His parents was promised a life-long dream job to cover the expensive housing in Rochester, and by agreeing to the contract given to them by suited men, they were pulled into the Medallion--a mafia group that works to maintain the drug market and the power balance in the city. Jerry’s family needed the money in order to pay for medicine for their sick members, and in order to move to a more safer and reserved location. Jerry and his father, Jonah Walker, worked day in and day out by smuggling drugs in and out the city and doing roundabout aggressive "visits" to non-paying customers. Jerry’s family merely wanted enough money to cover everything, so when they had enough when he was 15, they decided to escape the city and leave behind Medallion for good. However, they couldn’t escape their contract, and their plan was found out immediately. The charge for trying to leave Medallion while under a contract was death, and ultimately, his father, mother, and plagued little sister were murdered gruesomely as he watched. They decided to murder him last in order to witness the terror in his eyes, but he was saved by Fidel Brix and Zoe--two first generation detectives that have been following Medallion’s activity. He managed to survive that night and swore to find a way to gain revenge against his foes, but Fidel and Zoe locked him away from the world in order to have him reflect on the evil he committed while being with them. As a result, years past and he promised to become a detective like Fidel and Zoe to bring justice to those who wronged him and his family, but also help those whom fell into the same trap.

        That’s all for this Sunday. Look forward to the next one!

        Until next time, A.J.III.              
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        Anthony Jones III sent an update for Detective Diaries

          Heya, readers.

          Preeeetty late update, but I wanted to let you guys know that I have Chapter Two: Chemistry (Edited Version) up and ready for your eyes. As I said before, this chapter covers some insight on Olivia’s situation and even changes up some keys points in the chapter, such as the diary entry of Amani’s or the conversations between Amani and Carbine nearing the end. I hope you all enjoy, and please, show support by recommending or just commenting on your favorite part. Look forward to the next chapter very soon, possibly even tomorrow!

          Until next time, A.J.III.
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          Anthony Jones III liked an update for The Sleeping Man

          Good morning Dreamers!

          Well, the work continues even if it is made more difficult by moving across the country, but something must be working because we are only 11 pre-orders away, which is two less than a baker’s dozen. 

          And if that wasn’t enough, Stuart McCune of Millicent Barnes Comics has created some custom artwork for The Sleeping Man! The first is an alternate cover:

          And here’s The Sleeping Man standing:

          And here’s my personal favorite, Conqua:

          So let’s finish these last 11 orders and someone will get a signed print of whichever one they pick. The cover? The Sleeping Man? Conqua? If you’ve bought more than one copy, each order counts as an entry, so it means better odds for you!

          We have so much time left, but let’s not wait. Let’s keep this going and guarantee publication so I can stop matching on Tinder for pre-orders. 

          Sweet Dreams,

          Stephen

          P.S. If you enjoy amazing independent comics like I do, head over to http://millicentbarnescomics.jimdo.com/ and subscribe to get a free comic. 
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            Anthony Jones III sent an update for Detective Diaries

              Hello, readers.

              I’m glad I was able to this at least for the week. Welcome to our 8th Detective Sunday. I’m sorry for not upholding my end on the edited chapter that was supposed to come out this week. I’ve been very busy, and getting ready for a major shift in my life. I’m going off to college next weekend, and I just been spending time with family and friends before moving hours away, and also buying dorm stuff and considering getting a job to pay off things I might run into. However, I did stop to think about you guys, so I decided to edit both Chapter Two: Chemistry and Chapter Three: Theory for you guys next week. I’ll more than likely have them up in the middle of the week, so please excuse me for the late information. Also, I haven’t even went over what I was going to change for this Detective Sunday. I had planned to change up the synopsis or post something with a nice detail of background on the main/side characters so that people can get more invested in whoever they prefer in the story. I’ll let you guys know about that as well when the time comes. Now, enjoy your Sunday and I hope to get in contact soon.

              Until next time, A.J.III.
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              Anthony Jones III sent an update for Detective Diaries

                Hey, readers!

                Welcome to our 7th Detective Sunday. This week has been quite eventful for me. I’ve been volunteering, going out to our city’s festival, earning money, and much more. I hope all is well wherever you are, but let’s jump into this update.

                Now, last Sunday, I had said that I would be bringing new things to the project, or updating specific things to improve the future pre-ordering campaign of my book. The new "thing" for this Detective Sunday is an updated book cover. It’s a very unique shift from the cover of the man with pictures peeling off his face, and I want to go in this direction with the owl because it needs to symbolize the "watching" nature of the detectives. They encounter mysteries during their job and have to watch/analyze the scene and bring together their evidence to pin-point the true criminals. However, it isn’t always the criminals who are causing havoc, for those close to us assist the destruction knowingly. That’s why I chose the owl. The detectives need to always be on alert with their eyes open to balance lies and truth. Besides that, the picture looks pretty colorful and unique for my tastes. 

                That’s the only new thing for this Detective Sunday. Look forward to Chapter Two: Chemistry(Edited Version) sometime soon next week. Also, I want to mention that I will be shining some light on Olivia on this edited chapter. So far, she’s only been mentioned by Amani, but she’ll get some characterization and you’ll see her importance to Maxwell Marshall’s death.

                Have a good morning/afternoon wherever you are, and remember to spread the word and show support as you please. 

                Until next time, A.J.III.  
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                Anthony Jones III sent an update for Detective Diaries

                Hey, readers.

                I’ll keep this update pretty short, but I uploaded Chapter One: The Ward(Edited Version) today! Go check it out and see a good portion of differences in the beginning and nearing the end. I hope you enjoy, and remember to show support if you like it!

                Until next time, A.J.III.
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                  Anthony Jones III liked an update for Reflection

                  Forgive me dear followers for not getting chapter one up this weekend. I’ve fallen ill and just haven’t had the energy to get out of bed. I’m starting to feel a little better but I’m going to take it easy. Look for chapter one up this week though!

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                    Anthony Jones III sent an update for Detective Diaries

                      Yo, readers!

                      Welcome to our 6th Detective Sunday! I almost lost count haha. I hope you all are enjoying yourselves this summer. It’s been extremely hot where I live, and there’s not many pools in sight that I can have all to myself. Oh, and remember to stay hydrated. I remember feeling really really tired to the point that I almost fell out during football practice. It’s not a great feeling; especially with sports, mind you. Anyways, onto the update!

                      Well, I have a little surprise for you guys. This weekend I did some browsing through Inkshares and I felt I was missing plenty of things that other stable campaign books have. I wrote down some of the things and labeled them as weekly goals until I’m ready to start pre-ordering and such. Each Detective Sunday, I’ll bring something new to the table, or update the book synopsis and ask for opinions. However, today, this is the new "thing".                          https://youtu.be/0lJToqCG_n0

                      That link leads to a video I made for Detective Diaries. It’s just a video of simple still images with text and instrumental music in the background. I’m starting to get familiar with the program I use, which is Premiere Pro, but it’s a paid program I won’t hold onto for long. So, I will be testing out different programs, and if you guys have suggestions, please don’t hesitate to message me. Also, this is my first time doing something like this, so excuse any errors. I’ll post the video on the book’s page as well for people checking out Detective Diaries. 

                      Look forward to Chapter One: The Ward (Edited Version) sometime early next week. The beginning will be very different, and it will even feature Rean Bates--another key detective among the Detective Agency. Have a great morning/afternoon wherever you are, and remember to like the chapters and spread the word!

                      Until next time, A.J.III


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