Hello again,

Let's get this out of the way: I'm sorry for putting out two updates so close to one another. I really don't mean to spam, so I'll make this quick.

I messed up.

I realized a few days ago that every sample for 'A God in the Shed' that I had posted so far except for the prologue was from an earlier draft. This annoys me for a variety of reasons.

1. It makes the book look bad
   
2. It makes me look stupid
3. I had to upload more current material instead
4. All the thoughtful and insightful comments left by everyone are gone

The last one really gets me.

That being said; I've removed all the old material and replaced it with fresh samples. Everything is separated by chapter and goes up to chapter 9 like before. These are still subject to change in the final draft as I'm not 100% satisfied with everything (especially chapter 4. There's something about the flavour of that one that bugs me.) but at least now you have a better idea of the tone I'm going for.

I apologize for the lost comments and notes.

Thank you once more for your support

JF

Happy Satupdaturday!

Quick update to let you know how things are progressing, particularly since people keep stopping me and asking when they can get a copy of the book.

Hello everyone. 

I haven't posted an update in a little while due to a cold I contracted. It knocked me out the loop for a little while, but I can happily say that I'm now back on my feet and working diligently once more on the novel. I've just posted the new version of Chapter One to the Inkshares page, which introduces our central protagonist, Fionna Cohmwell! I'm really happy with how this came out, and I can't wait for everyone to read it and share their feedback. 

Looking ahead, I'm still drafting and writing out some of the remaining plot points or changes that I've made to the book(s), but I hope to have another pair of chapters; featuring Euwin Cohmwell and Silas, uploaded sometime this month. A new version of the cover is still on the way, and look for it soon. Beyond that, I will be making more of a media-blitz in the coming days, with several interviews, and a handful of con appearances. I'm really happy with how my book is taking shape, and a considerable part of that is due to all of you. Everyone who has taken the time to leave me feedback, shoot messages detailing their thoughts, and of course, supported my book with their pre-orders, has helped my story grow and evolve. 

I'd like to offer a shout-out to a couple people in particular, who've really helped me out lately. Courtney Smith of "Welcome to Deadlands" and Christine Brennecke, and Jordan Shisler, of  "Jadenel", have both lent me some great feedback and editing, along with Jemimah Halbert, who gave me some invaluable advice about my novel's narrative. John Robin, of "Blood Dawn", has also been invaluable, with his extensive wellspring of knowledge on the craft of writing, as well as his impressive media work. 

So, read the new chapter, give me your thoughts, and look for a bunch of material throughout October. I'm going to be looking to post my con-experiences (with pictures) somewhere soon, and a final note; I've noticed that The Children of the Forest currently has 173 followers, but only 98 unique sales. I'd like to implore everyone following the account to please pre-order a copy of the book. Help me break 100 unique sales, and get closer to my goal! I'm very proud of my story, and the feedback it's been receiving has been growing stronger with every day. Now is a great time to hop on and join the movement in making The Children of the Forest a reality.