Fortunately, one of the benefits of getting published on Inkshares is that I will get to work with professional editors who will be able to give me expert opinion on exactly this kind of thing as well as excellent proof readers who will also help me with polishing the text as much as possible before publication.
Rest assured that it isn’t my plan, nor Inkshares, to push a draft out the door before making sure it’s the best version of the book as we can make it.
Unfortunately, because of the fluid nature of a draft, I won’t necessarily be using verbatim versions of what’s on the project page. In fact, some of it has already gone through some revisions.