Amanda Orneck commented on an excerpt of Origin

This is the sort of sentence that seems to be here only to tell your reader that you have multiple races. Is there a way to introduce this concept without expressly just listing them out? Since this is a children’s show, how would they introduce this information on, say, Sesame Street?

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Amanda Orneck highlighted an excerpt from Origin

We all know about the different species of man, the Ratel, Coendou, Didact, Thaum, Carcha, Dohrnii, Cervidae, Crota, and the more reclusive Carabi of the desert

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Amanda Orneck liked an update for Sync City

Greetings Jackolytes,

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Cheers,

Peter

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