Rebekka S. Leber commented on an excerpt of The Seventh Aspect
I like your use of actions to break up dialogue, and emphasize that real world people multi task while talking.
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    he replied while tying the boy’s shoe.
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    Rebekka S. Leber commented on an excerpt of The Seventh Aspect
    I like Sam
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      “Mr. Bunny,” Sam repeated. “Simple and accurate, I like it
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      That was smart buddy. You did good,” Sam said.
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      That was smart buddy. You did good,” Sam said.
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      Well... as I see one paragraph later I was right on track. lol
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        uptight and proper
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        Rebekka S. Leber commented on an excerpt of Clockwork Charlie
        I’m getting a very prudent, propriety vibe from mommy dearest here. 
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