Joseph Asphahani commented on an excerpt of The Vatheran Prologue
On one hand, it is damn cool that your world-building extends so far, to the point where you’re even considering your own fighting styles. But on the other, I think maybe an extra 5-8 words here, tucked just after ’low guard,’ would go a long way to helping me SEE what this unique stance looks like. Ahh, sorry - a minor gripe. Honestly, I think this is great!
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    a low guard known as Wtnaj’ Onve
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    That’s an awesome name. (This - even among all the well-written description around it - stood out to me. I’m terrible at coming up with cool fantasy names. This one is great!)
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