Luke Fellner · Author · added almost 9 years ago
I’ve had a busy week, but it’s always good to stay busy! Thank you all for 25 followers! Please tell your friends about this project, you’d be doing us all a favor. I’d be more likely to get published, you’d be more likely to get a book, and they would also get something they’ll enjoy. Please stay in touch with me, I love hearing from you guys!
Luke Fellner · Author · added almost 9 years ago
I hope you all are have a good week. I’m happy to hear from a lot of you that you’re new to inkshares. It’s good to see that the community is growing, the more people there are on inkshares the better it is for us all as a whole.
Luke Fellner · Author · added almost 9 years ago
@Kevin Muhleisen Thank you very much for your feedback! I’m glad you liked it, I will take note next time I can go through and edit. It means a lot.
Kevin Muhleisen · Author · added almost 9 years ago
Hi, Luke.  I read through chapters 1 and 2. Your story is good. You have a lot of good imagery. Your descriptions paint a pretty clear picture of your characters and surroundings. One thing you might try and work on is character speech formatting. At times, it a little difficult to know who is speaking. The wording is good, and I like the different accents you characters have. It just needs a little finesse. Overall though, I’d say it’s a very good start.
Luke Fellner · Author · added almost 9 years ago
Thank you all for following my story! 21 followers for The Burned makes me very happy, but I’m hoping it will grow. If any of you know of any Western Fiction fans please tell them about my book. This website relies on a crowd, and I’m glad to say I have growing crowd!
Luke Fellner · Author · added almost 9 years ago
Hope all of you are getting things done that you want to get done. Staying productive and not giving up is essential when writing a book. As I wrote The Burned, even when I didn’t want to, I made sure I dedicated at least one hour a day to writing. Once you get out of the flow, it’s difficult to get back in, sucking it up is one of the best ways to achieve your goals.
Luke Fellner · Author · added almost 9 years ago
Hope you all had a good weekend. Hoping to get videos and a cover done finally, have had very little success when it comes to reliability but found a friend who I am hoping will finally help me out. 
Luke Fellner · Author · added almost 9 years ago
Thank you all for following my story, it means a lot. If any of you have feedback to give or questions please ask away, I check up on here daily. Also let me know if you’re in need of help with something, I’d be happy to help anyone that needs it!
Luke Fellner · Author · added almost 9 years ago
@Chad Legge I’m always peeking in at other people’s stories and try to leave some sort of comment on them. Thank you very much for the in-put. I am still editing so I’ll work on fixing the conversation between the two.     
Chad Legge · Author · added almost 9 years ago
Thanks for the comments on A New Dawn Coming...I gave chapter 2 a read and left a few individual comments on specific pieces. My overall impression is that it’s a good chapter. The conversation between Jay and the Hunter did feel a little bit awkward at times and it ended a little abruptly, but overall it was a good read. I’ll certainly be back for more! 
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