Greetings Bards!
I have just sent the opening scene of Man’s Damnation to your inbox. As always your feedback is welcomed with open arms. This scene is the book’s opening and thus sets the tone for the novel, I do hope you enjoy!
Cheers!
Christopher Lee
Feedback Tuesday!
Bards, Ovydds, Druids lend me your voice! I need your feedback!
What I need from you if you are following this book. Please take some time to let me know what you think thus far. That’s right I am looking for Feedback!
Specifically the Following : (What you like and don’t like about :)
1 : The Pre-Order Page - It’s overall feel and design.
2 : The Title
3 : The Cover
4 : The Tagline - At the Top of the Page Under the Title
5 : The Synopsis - In the About Section
6 : The Video - Some liked the Trailer, other’s think the artwork trailer is better.
7 : The Excerpts
8 : The Campaign - Which parts have you enjoyed, Lore? Character Profiles? Chapter Reading? Artwork? Let me know what got you to click Pre-Order. If you haven’t, let me know what will get you to click it!
I am asking you to take a little time to help me make this better, help me get this book into your hands and many others. I believe in this project, in this book. I hope that you will help me by providing me a wealth of feedback that I can use to retool this campaign.
I have extended the campaign for Man’s Damnation to January 1st of 2017. My reasoning, because this is going to get published, that’s why. I have garnered orders from 40, reviews from many, and recommendations from many. If I retool this campaign with what you all enjoy then I feel I will have greater success. Not that our success thus far isn’t fantastic, I just want to see more!
Have a Wonderful Afternoon and I hope to hear from you soon!
Cheers!
Christopher Lee
Greetings Bards! Quick Update!
I wasn’t sure if I had shared this with my readers on Inkshares yet. I had previously shared this on the Facebook Page for the Lore of the Aos Sí series. It is a cross section of the species, creatures, style, and culture of the inhabitants of Tír na nÓg. I do hope you enjoy!
The Top Row features the Tuatha Dé - Fairy Culture :
From Left to Right you see the Tuatha Dé High Born (Gentleman and Lady), the OakWatch Elite Guard, and the Low Born.
The Second Row features the Dweörg - Dwarven Culture :
From Left to Right you see the Dweörgen High Born (Lady Fegna Baermond), the Low Born ( Steam Train Conductor and a deep cavern crawler ), a StoneSkein enchanted warrior, and one of the Sunskein farmers of Zaragzar.
The Third Row features the Aélfar, Kentaros, and Jotun :
From Left to Right you see the Aélfaren High Born (Lantir Ereastar )and Moon Priestess, the Aélfaren Mistwalkers (Erialda Nohari), a Kentaros Horse Lord (Chiron), and a Jotun Blood Blathed (Anbar the Grim).
The Fourth Row features the Merfolk, Seraephym, and Faunus :
From Left to Right you see the Merfolk in humanoid form, their corresponding beast form, a Seraephym (Samsara), and the city Faun (Jemresh).
The Fifth Row features the Empyrean Culture :
From Left to Right you see an Empyrean Overlord, Elite Burugaz Shadow Warrior, Standard Infantry, Slave Scribe, halfbreed Aélfman (Phaero), and the Ensí Ubara Tutu.
The Last Row features the BanalFolk (Human Culture) :
From Left to Right you see a Sirothell Slum Lord, Gypsy, Air Captain, Noble Lord of House Sirothell, Yaegar of the Ironwood, and Renwick Waveborne of Waver’s Harbor in the Western Reaches.
This is but a small cross section of the breadth of this world. I hope you enjoy!
Cheers!
Character Profile - Yaegar The Knight Defender
Monday Lore Update - Mother’s Grace Continued :
Greetings Bards!
I have decided to run the artwork raffle through to the end of the campaign to maximize the draw for the book. I will be adding more and more pieces to the raffle as the weeks go by.
Just a refresher for those who have forgotten or who never saw anything about the raffle. There are two pieces of art up for grabs so far. Both 18" x 24" canvas prints of the Druidic Wheel and the Map of Tír na nÓg. There will be more art projects to come. I forsee Druid wands, amulets, and much more! All hand crafted by yours truly!
1. You will receive one raffle ticket for pre-ordering the book.
2. You will receive two raffle tickets for referring a friend who pre-orders the book.
Make sure to tell all of your friends and family about the book, beg, plead, harass, harang, threaten even...ok did I go too far? hmmm maybe lol
Cheers!
Have a great Friday!
Christopher Lee
Monday Lore Update - The Mother’s Grace 
We are only a couple weeks away from finishing the Mother’s Grace! So stay tuned!
Cheers!
Christopher Lee
Hail Bards, Ovydds, and Druids!
I am checking in to inform you of some changes to the page!
First of all, given a considerable amount of feedback, I have chosen to modify the title of the book. I have stripped the Man’s Damnation clause and left the Series name as the title for the first book. I think it flows just fine.
Secondly, I have updated the Book Cover design, obvious, isn’t it? New name, need a new cover. Tell me what you think!
Next order of business, given the poor reception of the last introduction video that I produced, I went back to the drawing board and came up with a new concept for the video. I have placed in on the Pre-Order Page and I will link it here.
NEW TRAILER FOR THE LORE OF THE AOS SÍ
Lastly, I want to reach out to all of you following. All 137 of you! You are following this project for a reason, either because I harassed you enough, or you find it intriguing. I know there are a lot of projects here on Inkshares, many of which are yours. I need your help!
1. Talk to me! Your feedback is INVALUABLE. I am writing this thing for many reasons, but the primary reason is because people have expressed interest. I need to know what you like, and what you don’t like if I am going to succeed.
2. Some of you have clicked that magical little button called Pre-Order. In fact 42 of 137. Not too bad really, in fact its AWESOME. Tell me what is holding the additional 95 back? Do I need to do something incredibly drastic? I’ll make a video of me singing the backstreet boys if it’ll sell copies! (Seriously, you have no idea the measures to which I will go. Dignity left me a long, long time ago)
Well? What do I have to do to get you to click Pre-Order this weekend? Tell me, and I swear to you I will do it....
Oh no...what have I done....
Cheers!
Christopher Lee