Thanks for pointing that out.  I appreciate it.  

Sounds cool! 

P.H. you have an apparent typo - looks like you meant to write "learn" and not "lean". Don’t you hate it when a typo still results in a real word, so spell-check doesn’t find it?

Interesting premise. I’m excited to read more about it!

Perfect!  Just the kind of feedback I need.  Thank you so much!  I appreciate it.  

I would ask what are the stakes for the scientist? He witnesses their destruction if he fails, but what is his skin in the game?

The Seventh Aspect will be my first novel.  I’ll be posting content throughout the entire process, all the way from the idea to the final draft.  You can follow along with me every dirty step of the way!