Christopher Leone · Author · added over 9 years ago
Thanks for the support, Jamison, glad you liked PARALLELS!

Jamison Stone · Author · added over 9 years ago
I enjoyed watching Parallels and look forward to seeing where Champions of the Third Planet takes us! 

I MADE A VIDEO! Starring me and my dog explaining CHAMPIONS OF THE THIRD PLANET in a little more detail than you’ve heard before, especially as it relates to my childhood obsession with STAR WARS. The video is up now on my page, I hope you’ll check it out.

Making the video took me away from the book and Inkshares for a couple of days, but now I’m back. I’m currently writing chapter 12 of the book -- Milo and the other kids are already dealing with some freaked-out aliens on a far-off planet where I am. Meanwhile, I don’t want to get stuck revising when I still have BLANK PAGES ahead of me but I wanted to jump back and clean up chapters 2 & 3 before I post. Also because I had a really cool idea for something that I’m guessing will happen around chapter 20 and need to set it up in the beginning of the book. 

Fun fact I’ve discovered: I’m bad with alien names. It takes a long time for me to come up with ones I like and then I have to brew on them for a while to see if they stick. I guess you can’t learn that about yourself until you start writing a book with a LOT of alien names.

I also have some pitches to catch up on -- sorry if you’re waiting for a response from me, I promise I haven’t forgotten! 

If you haven’t pre-ordered a copy of CHAMPIONS OF THE THIRD PLANET, please order one. It’s technically a middle grade novel, so it’s aimed first at kids 8-12, so if you know one of those, you should get it for him or her if you want to be considered a "cool" grownup.

But REALLY I’m really writing this book for me. I’d read this book and I’m a grown man!  I mean, I’m going to bow to STAR WARS again here -- George Lucas thought of STAR WARS as a kids’ movie (!) but grown-ups loved it just as much. In fact, most of my favorite movies appeal to everybody at any age: RAIDERS OF THE LOST ARK, GHOSTBUSTERS, BACK TO THE FUTURE. So that’s what I’m aiming for.

Thanks, hope you enjoy the video!

--Chris

Christopher Leone · Author · added over 9 years ago
Thanks guys, that’s extremely nice to hear!
Brian Fitzpatrick · Reader · edited over 9 years ago · 1 like
Hi Christopher, I love your passion for the story and the background brought me back to my own 10 year old self seeing Star Wars for the first time!  Best of luck on the contest!

Alexander Barnes · Author · added over 9 years ago
I like it. From the sample I have no idea what's going on, but I want to know more. I'll be keeping an eye on this for sure.
Christopher Leone · Author · added over 9 years ago
Ah thanks man, glad you liked PARALLELS!
Mark Chamberlin · Reader · added over 9 years ago
I saw "Parallels" and really enjoyed! Good luck with the book and I hope to order a copy.

Hi everybody,

Just a quick note to tell you I officially launched Champions of the Third Planet!  We are open for pre-orders as of this morning!

I also signed up for the new Nerdist contest on Inkshares, the theme of which is Space Opera, which is a very nice thing for this book.

Finally, I posted a tiny revision to the first chapter, and chapters 2 and 3 are going up very very soon. 

--Chris

P.S. For those of you who pitched me books, I'm sorry I haven't been able to read them yet but I'm going to check them out tonight!


James Strickland · Author · added over 9 years ago

I like the premise. The first chapter seems to be a little rough around the edges, it’s nothing catastrophic. This is one I’ll be keeping my eyes on.