Joni Dee · Author · added over 9 years ago

@Amylia Hood Amylia thanks for recommending! Everyone else who just followed - thanks for the growing interest, it really motivates me! As promised I will upload a new chapter by the weekend! I am just trying to choose which one & edit the hell out of it so I don’t mess up ;-)

Joni Dee · Author · added over 9 years ago

@Abigail Burton and Autumn Gass Abigail and Autum thx for the kind review !

Joni Dee · Author · added over 9 years ago

@Kai Szulborski Kai, thanks for the generous comments on chapter 2 .. I’ll attempt to edit a chapter from part II (farther down the plot line) this weekend to keep u folks interested. Thanks again!

Joni Dee · Author · added over 9 years ago

@Kirsty L Jennings wow thanks for that (blush) :$ - i hope u don’t mind that i’ll use this in my reviews ...

appreciate the feedback everyone. really makes me wanna give a push and finish it. (so hard to do but getting there soon) !!

Kirsty L Jennings · Author · added over 9 years ago

No problem! It is so easy to miss these things, your eyes just glance over them or automatically fills in whatever was missing.

When I started reading your book, I was captivated by the very first paragraph. From then one, I was hooked. The way you write almost made me fell like I was actually there. It was thoughtful and captivating, I can’t wait to read more!

Joni Dee · Author · added over 9 years ago

@CoRy Wyszynski Cory, thanks for the positive feedback and"likes".. for some reason the excerpts don’t pop up (@Thaddeus Woodman fyi) .. many thanks for the feedback.

Joni Dee · Author · added over 9 years ago

@Kirsty L Jennings Kirsty, thanks for pointing out. I imagine I have loads more tense mishaps across the manuscript... Thanks!

Joni Dee · Author · added over 9 years ago

@Rob Martin thanks for the positive feedback Rob! will read your draft over the weekend first chance i get. cheers!

Joni Dee · Author · edited over 9 years ago

@Hesse Caplinger thanks Hesse. I'm trying to follow all your comments but the excerpts aren't popping up anymore in my text :-( ... Trying to address all u said so far: Changed a bit the tense there as you said; I don't want to emphasize his background at the moment because it will unravel as the story progresses: beanie is the Brit way of saying it :D

Joni Dee · Author · added over 9 years ago

@Stephen Carignan Stephan, many thanks for the amazing review. i m speechless.