:$ thanks a lot Irazema!! will use it for later reviews if that's ok with u...

That opening paragraph really grabbed me! You write beautiful imagery!

Hola all, thanks for the support. If nothing comes out of it, at least I am motivated to finish this thing!! i am thinking about uploading chapter 3+4, then immediately chapter 1 or 3 from the second half of the book, where things are a bit more advanced... Liked? Cons? Pros? 

Yeah, it may not work as well with the shorter chapters.  Though it may.  Ultimately when it comes to design/layout I'm probably not the best one to be trying to give advice.  I'd just suggest trying it for a few chapters and if you end up not liking it or feel it is more of an impediment than a benefit then it would be easy enough to just take out the headings then.

Cheers Thomas - really appreciate the feedback. Yeah I like the idea - my only problem is that my chapters tend to be on the short side....

I think the headlines for chapters would be fine, though I may be biased since I sort of do the same thing.  With mine though its probably best thought of as headlines for larger parts, and these parts are made up of smaller non-headlined chapters.

I have added another section to the second chapter "Grey". at first i thought it was a new chapter, but i decided it can simply be under the same scene. I initially wanted headlines for chapters, with the place where they occur or the named after the subject (i.e. John, Grey etc.) ... do u agree or think it is redundant ? 

I have this thing written up to two thirds or so but in need of heavy editing.. are you at all intrigued? 

Hi guys, 1st thanks a lot for following! 2nd at this point would be great getting some comments. though i appreciate i have only uploaded two chapters of scene-setting would love to know whether you are intrigued and whether you think the writing is actually good enough.... I also wouldn't know when to start funding of such a thing? fairly new here... how many followers you would say consists a good base? Thanks a lot!! Jon

Let's do this mate!

This novel tells the story of a young foreign guy living in London who gets entangled in an adventure of espionage and political intrigues, set out in the gloom reality of terrorism today. Save the young lad, most of the other characters have been around in "the game" for a while, so the first half (already written) bounces between our time and flashbacks from London in the 60s & 70s, as the cold war defined things back then.