Wow, I must say, this is quite an interesting book! There’s a few grammar mistakes that have to be fixed, however, and if you could describe what the characters are doing/thinking clearly, that would be better. Also, in the beginning, I wasn’t quite a fan of how you revealed all of the info on the missing family. I’m sure you can think of something more clever and original. Any writer can!
All, thank you for the support. Things have been progressing well... This book is already completed, I’m just looking for editing and funding at this point! I’m very excited to get this one out into the world! :)
First of all, thank you for all of the pre-orders! I am so grateful to have so many taking an interest in my little novel. I’m an IT specialist by day, writer, artist and dreamer by night. I’d really like to add "published" to my writer title, so hopefully this gets somewhere. Again, thank you thank you to all who have crossed my path and made me feel supported. :)
Case 2 Supplementary and Case 3 are up for your reading pleasure! :)