Mason Force
Cool concept. There are so many directions you could go with this.
Nathan Primeau
My brother is working on a book, and the idea behind it is amazing! It reminds me of the amazing elements from Sci-Fi books that I studied in class last term.
Ferd Crôtte
Ooh, feels like a prequel to RoboCop, and I loved RoboCop! This could go in a number of cool directions. I will follow with interest!
Stephen Carignan
While I cannot say for certain in what direction this work is headed, what I can tell is a rich world with inherent internal and external conflict, which will definitely bring the reader into a three dimensional world.