Very hard to read, but for good reasons. I’m a dog lover :(
Otherwise, exceptionally well written. My only issue was some of the ’head hopping’ that took place in the chapter between the dogs and The Man. I’d keep it all on one perspective or separate each POV shift more definitively. Other than that, though, great stuff thus far.
Very hard to read, but for good reasons. I’m a dog lover :(
Otherwise, exceptionally well written. My only issue was some of the ’head hopping’ that took place in the chapter between the dogs and The Man. I’d keep it all on one perspective or separate each POV shift more definitively. Other than that, though, great stuff thus far.