Just wanted to post a quick note to let all three of you know I’m still here! Sorry for the radio silence. The job that pays the bills was taking more time than usual (those development crunches...).
I’m working on retooling that first chapter start. I feel like it might be a bit too slow a start. Instead, I’m going to take a page out of the original screenplay and start closer to where the action is. We’ll see how it feels.