Slice: A Story of Awfulness and Depravity, reached 42 followers on the 25th of May. This is a special sign of some sort, so I thought I’d not only add the first half of chapter three, but also update chapters one and two as there have been some small but significant edits. Two and a half chapters may not sound like much but it’s actually about 20,000 words. In normal chapters that’s about... I dunno, eleven?
Anyway - Happy Towel Day :) Have some obscene literature to celebrate!
Hi there Slicers! I’ve just baptised you with a collective noun! I hope you’re all well and groovy this spring? I’m messaging purely to share this review which, as well as containing solid criticism, made me hoot with joy like a hungry baby in a room covered with nipples...
I’ve been looking through the Terms of Service for Inkshares and I’m worried my book could be considered obscene due to the comments of some of my friends. Would anyone be able to give me a second opinion based on the two chapters that I’ve posted here? I don’t think it’s too bad myself, but I’d hate to start doing well on here then find out I’m unpublishable!
If there’s anything I can do in return (reviewing your work springs to mind) then I’ll be happy to repay the favour.
Hi there Slicers.
Slice: A Story of Awfulness and Depravity, reached 42 followers on the 25th of May. This is a special sign of some sort, so I thought I’d not only add the first half of chapter three, but also update chapters one and two as there have been some small but significant edits. Two and a half chapters may not sound like much but it’s actually about 20,000 words. In normal chapters that’s about... I dunno, eleven?
Anyway - Happy Towel Day :) Have some obscene literature to celebrate!
Hi there Slicers! I’ve just baptised you with a collective noun! I hope you’re all well and groovy this spring? I’m messaging purely to share this review which, as well as containing solid criticism, made me hoot with joy like a hungry baby in a room covered with nipples...
I laughed. I cried. I threw up in my mouth a little bit.It fulfills, in my opinion, the basic definition of the word "obscene," but for the fact that it possesses artistic value. The characters have a certain deranged charm about them, the subversion (perversion?) of the superhero origin story is refreshing, and there are several relatable observations on the human condition that I was not expecting from an excerpt containing so many bodily fluids and references to, pardon my French, toaster fucking.Although: there are way too many adverbs in this draft. The road to Hell is paved with adverbs.
Hi folks, thanks for your support to date :)
I’ve been looking through the Terms of Service for Inkshares and I’m worried my book could be considered obscene due to the comments of some of my friends. Would anyone be able to give me a second opinion based on the two chapters that I’ve posted here? I don’t think it’s too bad myself, but I’d hate to start doing well on here then find out I’m unpublishable!
If there’s anything I can do in return (reviewing your work springs to mind) then I’ll be happy to repay the favour.
Cheers,
Glenn