Nice job! I want more!

Even though not a lot actually happened or was explained in the first chapter, the situation and writing still left me intrigued.  I was left with desire to know more, which is what all good fiction should do.  I look forward to future chapters!

Realm of Verilius drops its readers right into the action, waking up to a new and unfamiliar world with young Prince-to-be Lucas Roberts. I look forward to reading more of his journey, accompanied by his mysterious guide Malcolm.