I realize I’ve been out of touch for a while. Of Ashes has been progressing slowly and has become somewhat of a side project now. It will be finished this year along with my other projects. I have a Wattpad account in which I have been writing everything. I’ll post the link here for all my fellow Wattpad-ers. https://www.wattpad.com/user/SunshineLola17 Follow my progress there and enjoy!
This first chapter is, for me, exactly what a first chapter should be. You paint a vivid picture of both the environment and the two characters you introduce. Just within the first paragraphs I feel for Katherine and want to read more about her. You've done an amazing job!
I realize I’ve been out of touch for a while. Of Ashes has been progressing slowly and has become somewhat of a side project now. It will be finished this year along with my other projects. I have a Wattpad account in which I have been writing everything. I’ll post the link here for all my fellow Wattpad-ers. https://www.wattpad.com/user/SunshineLola17 Follow my progress there and enjoy!
The first chapter has been uploaded! Be gentle!