Discussion

Bethany G Mellon · Reader · added almost 3 years ago
Great opening line! Your turns of phrases are fresh. Can’t wait to read the rest. 
Ricky Ruszin · Author · added almost 3 years ago
Thanks, Tom! I really appreciate that. Thank you for taking the time to read. :)
Tom Overlook · Author · added almost 3 years ago
Really like what you have so far. The close of the first chapter was really well done. I can’t wait to see how you handle the tall, horned creature.