Hey there! Wrapping up my lunch break today by updating this draft a bit. I’ve incorporated some feedback, made some other changes, added things I hate and removed things I loved. Then said "screw it" and added back some things.
Then I got irritated at the whole affair and decided to leave it alone for a while.
Then I read it again, did some edits, and now I’m uploading it for you guys to check out! I *neeeeeeed* feedback! Please let me know your thoughts. And I truly appreciate the brave - if you don’t like something, tell me and tell me why. Thank you so much for your support and interest!
Hey there! Wrapping up my lunch break today by updating this draft a bit. I’ve incorporated some feedback, made some other changes, added things I hate and removed things I loved. Then said "screw it" and added back some things.
Then I got irritated at the whole affair and decided to leave it alone for a while.
Then I read it again, did some edits, and now I’m uploading it for you guys to check out! I *neeeeeeed* feedback! Please let me know your thoughts. And I truly appreciate the brave - if you don’t like something, tell me and tell me why. Thank you so much for your support and interest!