My dreams are written in words  an access to Fiza Hasan · Author · added 6 months ago
  I believe this is a good start, and especially since you didn’t go down the cliché route and make this the first riot. I think the first paragraph you had in italics you should put as your synopsis so readers know before they begin reading, what the book is about. But, that’s just an opinion, it really depends on what you think. Overall, great work!